My Peer Assessment on Angel

This is my Peer Assessment that I did on Angel as you can see Angel has done really well. I had to check Angels Narrative to see if her narrative was alright with no mistakes. When I checked Angels narrative I saw that there were no mistakes. Angel and me checked each others narrative. I think that Angel has written a really good narrative. All that Angel needs to work on is describing what the characters look like and using a variety of language feautures and makin changes and proof reading and editing her writing.